Our Little Corner of the World: beginnings of a song!

Wednesday, March 4, 2009

beginnings of a song!

When everyday is a battle,
life is a war
with innocent casualities
and white flags above the doors.
We learn to take
enough life to give
We learn to die
by which we learn to live.

Too cliche?

3 comments:

teagen marie said...: no i like it!; March 5, 2009 at 6:05 PM
Riley said...: first half amazing! second half good!; March 6, 2009 at 9:59 PM
laura said...: thnks guys. riley, workin on the second half. it's not my favorite. suggestions?; March 10, 2009 at 5:23 PM